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krellin (80 DX)
03 Jul 14 UTC
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Sci-Fi / Fantasy Writing Group
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Draugnar (0 DX)
09 Jul 14 UTC
"Is Draug really saying you can't talk about a fat kid cannonball because it's not PC?

Fuck that shit "

No Chaqa, I said you have to think about your audience and what *sells* when writing if you plan to publish. If your writing a 007 novel, PC goes out the window. If you are writing a teen angst/love story/typical dreck novel, then PC has to be part of the writing style.
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
Well Draug,this is neither a teen angst / love story or typical dreck....so I guess I'm free from PC requirements.

Frankly, use of a phrase such as "Like and invisible fat kid doing a cannon ball" in a First Person narrative is a statement BY the character, not by the author. If someone reads it and finds a little off-putting...well hell, the first thing that character does in the book is down a jar of moonshine for breakfast...so yeah, I don't think we are dealing with a PC character by any stretch of the imagination.
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
kasi - Tell me about the "VIBE" that you were getting, and how it destroys it. I think I understand what you are saying, but I would like to here your further thoughts on that specifically.
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
I would like to further read your thoughts, that should say...
Draugnar (0 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
No, Krellin, it's SciFi read by geeky, fat nerds. You are disenfranchising a big part of your core audience.
Chaqa (3971 D(B))
10 Jul 14 UTC
rofl Draug
Draugnar (0 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
Like *an* invisible...
*hear* hour thoughts...

You really need to work on the grammar if you expect to publish.
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
Every geeky fat nerd I knew grewing up would have thought it's hillarious when the fat kid does a cannon ball and splashes all teh pretty people.

I think you've grown soft in your old age, my friend.

Anyway - I've already agree in principle to change it - but I fundamentally disagree that it is taboo, and I also **completely** disagree with the idea that (despite Libtard media assertions to the contrary) that all our youth are soft little wusses that get offended at the slightest drop of a non-PC phrase.

Chaqa - how old are you?

SYnapse is a high school english teacher, I believe - so I would tend to believe that he leans left, leans towards sensitivity trainging and all that, and resoundingly believes that modern bullying is somehow far worse than bullying that has existed forever, etc. (Not a slam, SYnapse - just a character profile of you).

I'm an old 45 year old fart who grew up being taught and believing "Stick and stones can break my bones and words can never hurt you" and can for damned sure say I never put down a book with an interesting story because of a single phrase in a sentence.

I'm curious as to peoples thoughts on this topic by age?

krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
(Irony -- Draug says I can't use such a phrase,and them slams the entire sci-fi reading audience. lol)
ssorenn (0 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
Krellin, I'm about your age, and as I agree with most of your thoughts there,and I grew up with the same adage of "sticks and stone" , in this age of social media words can hurt...
Chaqa (3971 D(B))
10 Jul 14 UTC
krellin, Draug is being so utterly ridiculous it's hilarious.
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
Question: Who did the read on the story and provided all the suggestions? I really appreciated it...I'm going to have to hire you lol
Draugnar (0 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
"(Irony -- Draug says I can't use such a phrase,and them slams the entire sci-fi reading audience. lol) "

I *am* the target audience therefore I feel free to stereotype and insult myself.
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
Did you really feel insulted? Seriously?
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
And did you read the story so far, or just the discussion here?
Draugnar (0 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
I didn't feel insulted and have been on my phone all day, so I haven't read it.
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
OK. Well, I'd be curious if you ever decide to read it. I'm leaving it as is for the moment until I come back and do a fresh edit - so if you are interested it'll be there.
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
I've got an ILN spotting on the forums...but...sadly...no ILN here....

I say it's time to examine our lurker.
dirge (768 D(B))
10 Jul 14 UTC
Sadly, I see this whole project in a downward death spiral. There are few things as personally difficult to swallow as one's writing being criticized; and webdip is not exactly a sensitive online community.

So I just read the J. Land wolf story.
- Who is J. Land?
- Do you want feedback here or on the writerscafe group?

Can we try to keep the discussion constructive? As I type this, I realize how stupid that sounds on webdip. Maybe it is a fools errand.
Chaqa (3971 D(B))
10 Jul 14 UTC
I figure, this thread is for bullshit / making fun, the actual pages are for the good stuff.
dirge (768 D(B))
10 Jul 14 UTC
point
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
dirge - I have recieved constructiove comments on my in-progress google doc, and on a complete story that I put up in the website, and I intend to read one or two of the posted stories there this weekend and offer comment (but I need time and proper quiet to do a decent review).

Here's the thing:
Writing is a process that takes time.
Properly reviewing writing – depending on whether it is a full edit of the writing, versus just general commentary on the content, takes time.

I’ve read about different writer’s groups, and it seems that typically they work on a schedule – people meet (these were about F2F groups), exchange writing to review and then discuss. Obviously that isn’t going to work. So, perhaps what we need to do is this:
1. Set a schedule – have a regular time frame in which we will start the discussion of a writing
2. Have people seeking review post their content at least a week prior to review date
3. Have limited expectations – maybe only expect up to the first 5000 words reviewed (we can discuss this)
4. Maybe partner up, so instead of everyone having to read everything, each person has 1 or 2 assigned readings to comment on, and can also read and comment on others if they want to, have the time, etc.
5. Rotate partners for each scheduled discussion period

Does that sound like a decent start to structure this?
krellin (80 DX)
10 Jul 14 UTC
(Bear with me, dirge, I'm never run a discussion group, let alone a purely on-line one, which offers more difficulties.)

Also - yes, we need to learn to take criticism without bristling. If I bristled at the criticism I recieved, I apologize.
dirge (768 D(B))
10 Jul 14 UTC
Good plan.


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erik8asandwich (298 D)
10 Jul 14 UTC
New Game
Hi all. I started up a new PPSC game. Anon players. 1 day phases. It will be kicking off on Monday assuming we get enough players. If you're interested please join! Good luck! Summer Game gameID=144430
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Troodonte (3379 D)
09 Jul 14 UTC
Need 1 for Gunboat
see below
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SandgooseXXI (113 D)
07 Jul 14 UTC
Forum Invisibility
There are various times where my posts go "unnoticed". What am I? Chop liver? Does no one give a shit about Goose anymore? Who’s dick do I have to suck to get some recognition here?!
#angrygoose #countongoose
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Kallen (1157 D)
08 Jul 14 UTC
I thought some of you on this webdip site were ridiculous...
And then I saw this guy

http://bleacherreport.com/articles/2028250-fan-at-new-york-yankees-vs-boston-red-sox-gets-caught-on-camera-in-deep-sleep?utm_source=facebook.com&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=programming-national2
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kasimax (243 D)
09 Jul 14 UTC
anyone else seen boyhood yet?
film of the year so far.

to all the teenagers, students, parents or whatever out there: go watch this movie. it's amazingly beautiful.
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thomas dullan (422 D)
09 Jul 14 UTC
Cancellation of "He has no enemies..." (can't find the ID. It's been cancelled)
How come this got cancelled? Who cancelled it? According to my records, the required unanimity for a cancellation was not achieved. Can anyone explain?
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A_Tin_Can (2234 D)
07 Jul 14 UTC
Ghostrating formula
See inside for ratings geekery:
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Norman Conquest (1218 D)
08 Jul 14 UTC
Design Flaw in the Global Variant
I have now encountered several times a design flaw in the global variant in that fleets may not pass between Armenia and Moscow (which has a Black Sea Coastline bordering Armenia); neither can they support an action between them. Armies may move and support unimpeded; but fleets may not. What is to be done about that? Game Masters, please respond.
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Dunecat (5899 D)
08 Jul 14 UTC
New gunboat game, cheap buy-in, fast phases
Using the American map. American empire is over, dawg.

http://webdiplomacy.net/board.php?gameID=144314
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dirge (768 D(B))
08 Jul 14 UTC
replacement player needed gameID=144055
gameID=144055

Russia, not in a bad position at all, please consider joining.
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SYnapse (0 DX)
07 Jul 14 UTC
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No naughty words
Draugnar, pleeeaase can you stop saying words like fuck and shit, it makes people leave and gives jimo a brain hemorrhage.

VIOLATORS WILL BE B&
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Ogion (3882 D)
19 May 14 UTC
PPSC Series Standings
Two games done, five to go
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Sylvania (4154 D)
08 Jul 14 UTC
North America. Diplomacy.
Combining the two must surely be a good thing.
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krellin (80 DX)
08 Jul 14 UTC
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Forum Levitation
Yeah -- blacklists, invisibility. I want a special power, too...
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bo_sox48 (5202 DMod(G))
07 Jul 14 UTC
Feature Request - Blacklist
I know this has been proposed before, but...
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jmo1121109 (3812 D)
07 Jul 14 UTC
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Current Mod Team Listing
As mentioned by members in the past, there was previously no place to find the current members of the moderator team. To address this I've added a listing to the credits page. http://www.webdiplomacy.net/credits.php.
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Draugnar (0 DX)
07 Jul 14 UTC
If a mod said
Would you assume the mod was joking? Or would you assume (as I did) the mod was serious?
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Jamiet99uk (898 D)
07 Jul 14 UTC
Sick trophy hunters
Look at this sick bastard. This wealthy american paid thousands to corrupt gamekeepers to be allowed to hunt down and shoot a triceratops in the wild. Creatures like this will soon be extinct if scumbags like this are allowed to get their way, just because they're rich they think they can do as they please:

http://i2.wp.com/topekasnews.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/05/yznKsSt.jpg
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Tardigrade (102 D)
07 Jul 14 UTC
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The War of Tumblr versus 4Chan
Anyone else watching the war of Tumblr vs. 4Chan play out? It's getting heated and somewhat illegal. Then again, it may not and it's all a bluff from both sides. But if it is true then there must be a lot of hackers with free-time and no need to gain any monetary value.
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bo_sox48 (5202 DMod(G))
07 Jul 14 UTC
Just Sayin...
Where's my hoverboard...

http://puu.sh/a0HAI/a36c2e1274.png
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Dunecat (5899 D)
04 Jul 14 UTC
MRW that ONE country in a gunboat game WON'T FINALIZE
http://replygif.net/1511
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ckroberts (3548 D)
28 Jun 14 UTC
Looking for a couple of good games
I would like to start a couple of good games.
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ssorenn (0 DX)
07 Jul 14 UTC
New site policies
Since things have changed here( not that im upset), i think it should be made crystal clear what is and isnt tolerated. It cant be a 1 off situation.....we all need to know what the lines are, from the people who are imposing this stuff!
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Tyrion14 (236 D)
07 Jul 14 UTC
Muting error?
Help! In game, I cannot talk to certain nations, or them with me, as they are "muted" yet everyone's name has an active speaker icon (no red X's) beside it. How do I unmute someone who isn't actually muted? Thanks!
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Jamiet99uk (898 D)
05 Jul 14 UTC
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Mafia
I'm sick of muting all these mafia threads. Could someone set up a seperate website for it? The domain www.webmafia.com appears to be for sale.
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Draugnar (0 DX)
07 Jul 14 UTC
Thank you, Zultar!
Your gracious gift will allow me to have 350 more points in my coffer soon enough. :-). Just kidding, but thank you for sponsoring the GR challenge.
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Draugnar (0 DX)
06 Jul 14 UTC
I really hate this game...
So why do I keep playing?

We all have a love/hate relationship with Diplomacy (maybe not all, but enough of us) so why are we so compelled to keep playing? What is the addiction?
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Fasces349 (0 DX)
30 Jun 14 UTC
Realpolitik Diplomacy-sign ups
Realpolitik diplomacy is diplomacy with a twist, unlike the standard game, this game will be played with a internal politics mechanism. Instead of playing as a country, you play as a political party within that country, vying not only to be the dominant force on the board, but also to command the loyalties of your electorate. See in side for the rules.
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Al Swearengen (0 DX)
06 Jul 14 UTC
How to Play Turkey?
My least favorite country =-(


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