And for those who might mention it,
3. If you cannot make your silly dystopian novel-or any novel--work within three chapters...you fail. Plain and simple. You have to impress a publisher far, far, FAR sooner than that to even get your foot in the door, so I'm sorry, I'm not sitting through 11 hours of an audiobook when the first three chapters of it are...BAD.
Well, hurtling between "bad," "dull," "illogical," and "oh my God are you fucking serious right now with that utter lack of even common sense?"
Again, not badly written at all, really (my only complaint about Veronica Roth's writing style-wise is that I really think it'd work better for either a 3rd-person perspective or a girl about 5 years older than her run-of-the-mill teen protagonist...because I'm sorry, teenage girls--and boys, for the matter--don't think or use the words Roth uses in her narration, they just don't...so it's not badly written, but if this girl was, well, maybe 22 or so instead of 15-6 or so I'd be a lot more forgiving here.)
But that premise is BAAAAAAAAD......and the execution doesn't help at all...
And unlike THG (which I likewise felt had a pretty silly premise, though I'll at least say that it seemed marginally less silly than this setup and marginally more original, though I don't know if that's more a point to THG or a point against Divergent) there isn't a semi-strong protagonist lead to carry you through it.
For as frustrating as the logic in that book is, AT LEAST I could get through it because the Katniss character is a pretty decent female lead for young adults (and even for just adults, really, though I still don't think she's that revolutionary...but she worked well enough.)
Not so here.
This character...I don't CARE if her special test (which is one of the dumbest tests I've ever heard of in my life) labels her as being honest, brave and intelligent (nice creation of a Mary Sue there, by the way)--
I'm not buying the intelligent part of it, pretty sketchy on the brave part, and while honesty is nice...I'd like to think that'd be more of a prerequisite for being a civilized person rather than a special character attribute.
And why even have "Young Adult Novels," may I ask?
I again don't get or agree with the concept of targeting books at "young adults"...I have faith kids can read adult novels with adult content in it just fine, it doesn't have to be high-school-ized, and I hate the mentality it creates in the publishing community--
That mass-produced series/franchises are more important than quality one-off bestsellers that can then lead to more novels (in a series or not), and the idea that everything needs to be catered to a gimmick and a niche (first it was magical schools, then paranormal romance, now it's dystopian romances.)
And it gives authors far, far too easy an out--
If the novel's praised, they get to enjoy praise...
If the novel's criticized, at all, they get to hide behind that most hated of phrases--
"It's just for KIDS."
That doesn't mean it has to be a pile of illogical, pandering crap...and while Divergent's not quite as bad as that, it's still the cherry on top of the shit sundae.